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*MartinSilvertant Oct 21, 2012  Professional General Artist
I already gave my praise on the poster presentation of Tango but again I want to say great work in general, but there are still some points of criticism as well.

All the tittles (dot on /i and /j) and dots (also in the percentage symbol) should be bigger so they look optically as fat as the letters. In the light weight they almost disappear right now. I would also make the quotes in the bold weight more fat. The dots in : and ; should be further apart or it probably won't look good in text (though this might just be a matter of taste).

I would give the /j a serif like in /i. In the Dutch and presumably also South African language there is an /ij digraph so perhaps you could add a ligature for that in which the /j also has a tittle and a serif to match the /i in height and style.

In the bold @ symbol, the outer "circle" is too close to the /a. I would give it the same distance between the strokes as between individual letters. The question mark looks pretty odd with that huge bulk on the right; I would rather balance it out by moving the vertical stem and the dot towards the horizontal center of the glyph.

As for the numbers, I would open up the 5 a bit (if you also open /t a bit more that is; it's a matter of taste I guess but in case of /e you really need to open it more because it looks confusing with the almost closed terminal). In case of 2, 3, 4 and 7 I would bring the curving parts more towards the middle to distribute the strokes better.

I hope this helps.
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thanks. helped me alot:)
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*MartinSilvertant Oct 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
You're welcome.
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~Zozzy-evil Oct 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well Done!
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Mood: Joy ~coreper Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Awesome! Love it!
And gratz on getting it on MyFonts!
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